Narrative

This is an image of our original, less detailed narrative: 

Our narrative is as follows: 

The opening shot of the Thriller will be a low angle shot of feet walking aimlessly towards an empty film. The angles will vary with this scene from head on, to the side and over the shoulder shot showing the male character walk onto the field. It will the cut to a shot of a male character standing will a female character on the far side of the field. The female will have long hair  which it what draws the male to her. Throughout this scene there will we flickering shots of close up shots of the male character with a handful of a woman's hair smelling it and various signs in his workshop/office at home. The narrative is kept simple as it is only the opening of the Thriller, so we want the audience to think for themselves as to what happens next. There will then be shots of the man cutting off women's hair. The opening scene will finish will a close up of a females mouth and then the male character suddenly covering her mouth.